Vamp's Light - December 1, 2010

Chapter 1:
   (Narration by: Sarah Phan)
 Today, I was at the park and met this guy. He was very pale and gothic. He wore black clothes. He's a teen just like me. I think I know where he lives. He lives in this old house in the woods.
 He does go to my school, he is really smart at history. He had info on the Civil War, that Mr. Kinder didn't even know!
 At recess he caught a football and threw it so high in the air! During science class, we were disecting frogs and I cut myself by accident. He imediately leaves the room. I ran into him in the hallway and introduced himself. He was Raymond Nguyen. I really like that name.
 Next day:
   I was at the cemetry near my school. I was there for the quietness. I was writing an essay. Then fog appeared and I jumped with fright. I saw a figure appear from the mist. I ran. Ghosts are not real I thought to myself. I tripped. I got scraped! It was bleeding like crazy! I ran into Raymond. "Are you okay?" he asked. "Thanks I think I got scraped." i replied. I looked at the blood. I looked back and raymond was gone. I had enough evidence to infer that Raymond has a secret and it is horrible. I suspect it.

 

-Steve Phan

Topic: Vamp's Light - Steve Phan

Date: 12/02/2010

By: Antonio

Subject: Vampires

Vampires are overly used.

Date: 12/02/2010

By: Gigi

Subject: Sorry

Sorry Steve, but this is suspiciously similar to Twilight by Stephanie Meyer.

Date: 12/03/2010

By: Steve

Subject: Re: Sorry

Um, i thought of this myself! I hate twilight honest!

Date: 12/03/2010

By: Steve

Subject: Re: Sorry

I hate Twilight! Chapter 2 comin' soon!

Date: 12/02/2010

By: Aimee

Subject: twihard

this is just like twilight.. think of your own ideas!

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