The Slow Time Mover - October 2, 2010

So it seems, time is not my friend
I move hindered and slower than you can conceive
Each time I breathe
I feel every particle drift into my body
When my blood courses
It walks gradually around my veins
When my heart beats
It echoes on and on 
And each time I blink
Is a full year of darkness

The worst is this
You have lived and loved
Been broken and healed
Cried and feared
Made a lifetime of memories
Died and turned to dust
All while I was sleeping

I am only thankful
That I glimpsed you for a moment
And loved you madly and deeply for that second
Because it was a lifetime

The End
 

-Kortnee Tilson

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The Slow Time Mover - Kortnee Tilson

Date: 10/19/2010

By: Grape

Subject: *tear*

Sad! Isn't it depressing to love someone so madly but have them slip out of your fingertips!

Date: 10/19/2010

By: Kortnee (author)

Subject: Re: *tear*

Yes, it's quite a sad thing. Hope you liked it.

Date: 10/03/2010

By: Tess

Subject: Good

This was really good. Great job Kortnee!