Pain - August 22, 2010

Pointed glass to supple skin,
the pain is my awakening.
Red liquid stains my soul,
shows me how torn I am.
Once whole, but now broken,
won't my life end?
Now my pain, it grows,
overcomes me,
erases everything I once was.

Now just a shadow of opaque smiles,
I walk through life,
bleeding my eternal sorrow,
shutting out the light,
I feast on my darkness.

Everything was changed,
when I put that
pointed glass to supple skin,
the pain was my ending.

-Chelsea B

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Pain by Chelsea B

Date: 09/16/2010

By: Antonio

Subject: Nice

That was an intense poem! I really felt the emotion while I read!

Date: 08/25/2010

By: anikay

Subject: O_o

I like it, I'm gonna submit one of mine. Check it out please

Date: 08/25/2010

By: Gigi

Subject: Great Voice

I like your narration. Great vocabulary, but not over wordy. Awesome job!

Date: 08/23/2010

By: Tess

Subject: Wow.

This was way good.

Date: 08/23/2010

By: Chelsea B

Subject: Re: Wow.

Glad you liked it. =]
Thanks for the compliment, and for commenting. =]

-Chelsea B

Date: 08/25/2010

By: Tess.

Subject: Re: Re: Wow.

No problem!