Just Another Boy - September 1, 2010

When he looks at me and smiles,
My life seems so much more worth while.

I want to go and talk to him when he's up ahead,
But the thought only fills my mind with limitless dread.

For now, I'm just a girl he knows,
But soon he will give me a rose.

-Kiki

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Just Another Boy - Kiki

Date: 09/16/2010

By: Antonio

Subject: Rose?

It would have been better without the last two lines. It seems you just slapped them on there to add some rhyming words.