Dismal - August 25, 2010

I was walking down the street just to get some things straight, and I met one of those guys to whom life wasn't great, when I asked him what he thought, he told me this

There was once a time when no one cried
but now we're left behind to watch it all unwind
there's no good enough form of faith
all our gods have left their place
and now all we have is that empty space.
Those they left behind watch it all unwind
as the world just comes undone
our own invisible cloud hiding our only sun
which is our only source of life
and it's gone, before our very eyes
there's nothing left for us to love
we're the gods forsaken, and i've given up.

The man was rather dismal, but he had an open mind, he wished for life but in return all he got was lies.

There are many different views and people on this earth, some of whom don't believe that we're not God's worth.

The pain he feels as he watches us kill,
and you wonder why there's a place called hell
at this point in time he should let it all unwind

I said goodbye and went on my way
there is no hope and without a faith
you're lost amongst this sea of grief
bound gagged and thrown on the streets
ever since your government refused to hear your cries
you nor anyone else has ever felt alive.

I passed a school on my way back home
and I saw a young boy feeling so alone
the school was empty void of any life
it had been abandoned, the killings had their price
yet he still sat amongst his memories
the only thing he has
his sad, sad memories
as he looks upon his death.

As I stared at him he looked at me
and in his eyes I was shocked to see
a glimmer of life, he tried to smile
I was about to move when I saw the sign
the schools demo time had arrived
he waved goodbye and I walked away
I galnced back once and then I prayed.

I said goodbye and went on my way
there is no hope and without a faith
you're lost amongst this sea of grief
bound gagged and thrown on the streets
ever since your government refused to hear your cries
you nor anyone else has ever felt alive.

Look at what they've done to me!
Done to us, done to we!
We must rise, it is our time
our time to revolt, our time to arise
we can reform, fix broken lives
and kill all of their lies!

-Anikay
 

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Dismal - Anikay

Date: 09/16/2010

By: Antonio

Subject: Wow

This is really good.

Date: 08/27/2010

By: Tess

Subject: Awesome

Anikay,
This poem is really really good. It seems like it's supposed to be a song. Is it?
-Tess

Date: 09/28/2010

By: Anikay

Subject: Re: Awesome

Yes, it is, I wrote this in school one day, thanks for your support guys!