Dark Clouds - December 27, 2010

My mind is a blur
Somewhere lost in the clouds
The clouds colored black and grey
Do you notice?
Do you care?
I'm lost and alone
Dark clouds are filled with guilt
Filled with sorrow
Empty by shame
Still not noticed
Screams kill silence
Still you hear nothing
Dark clouds are only thoughts of you
Killing me slowly
Why do you bring them upon me?
Is it only fair?
So that I have forever proof?
Dark clouds are no more than dark memories
But I can't let go
I won't let go
 

-Molly

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Dark Clouds - Molly

Date: 01/02/2011

By: Himedal

Subject: Nice job

I was wondering your age. It is kind of strange seeing a 14 year-old girl has been through a lot. I only had one girlfriend and I am all alone now because I still love her but the situation is dire so she preferred to leave me alone.
Sadness is my favorite subject to write about as well. Keep up.

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Date: 01/14/2011

By: Molly

Subject: Re: Nice job

Haha, I am 14. I promise. Sadness is just a dark cloud that anyone can overcome. But you can't overcome it alone. Having been through a lot has put me in a state of mind that makes me seem older. I started praying a lot. I truely believe God helped me through this mess. :)

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Date: 12/28/2010

By: Tess

Subject: ...

What inspired this? You don't have to tell me, if it's too personal... it's just so sad.

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Date: 12/28/2010

By: Molly

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I dated a guy that continuously hurt me. He knew I was sensitive after being verbally abused by a guy named Jonathan, but he continued to hurt me. It was as if he didn't care if I was alive or dead. And now, he dates a skank and I date his best friend that I love so much. :)

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Date: 12/28/2010

By: Tess

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Wow, you've been through a lot. It really shows in your writing. You're an amazing writer :D

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Date: 12/29/2010

By: Molly

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thanks! i was also a cutter back then, but God showed me out of that. now im 14 and praising God for the life He's given me :)

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