April 8, 2011

i see a smiley face staring back at me,
but if you crack the yolk there is a sad
face crying reaching out for help. but no
one will help all alone no one there to help you,
with a face torn and ragged tears flowing no one there
to comfort you,crying till your eyes go dry. but
you still have a smile on your face so every one
thinks your fine but you realy not.

-bella

bella

Date: 04/09/2011

By: Gigi

Subject: Nice Poem

It's a good poem, but it would be better if you used proper grammar!

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