A Castle Far Away - May 17, 2010

I see a tower in the distance,
Glowing with a sort of brilliance,
I want to go inside,
But I can never get over there.
What's on the other side?
My thoughts float to the air.
My dreams are so vivid,
But out of reach.
My curiosity turns to hatred.

By Glen

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A Castle Far Away

Date: 08/18/2010

By: cry

Subject: sad

I don't feel happy when I read this.

I don't like it. (no offence, Glen)

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Date: 07/20/2010

By: ...

Subject: ...

i don't get this.

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Date: 08/23/2010

By: Chelsea B

Subject: Re: ...

Then you have no brain, because it's quite simple. Because he can't get to the castle which he is most curious about, he begins to hate it BECAUSE his curiosity can never be satisfied.

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Date: 01/30/2011

By: Tess

Subject: Re: Re: ...

I liked this poem more after reading this.

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